I learned with this new topic that the whole point of what you’re supposed to writing for this assignment should center around creating clarity with what you’re writing, make it easy for the reader to find what they’re looking for and to make sure that your writing fulfills their purpose for why they’re reading your writing and one of the main ways you can do this is to keep the readers attention by not convoluting your writing too much and keeping it short and straight to the point and with my new, revised post, I decided to do just that by cutting some sentences from my original post and keeping the word count fairly low so that the reader can get the information they need instantly without having to read through a bunch of text that they may see as filler and not necessary to their purpose for reading my introduction post.
As previously mentioned in previous questions, putting the services into a list form instead of burying them in a sea of text that the reader would have to read through before getting to them was one of my main objectives when writing my new post because I figured that the main purpose of the introduction post was to inform the audience on what we can serve to them in terms of services.
For example, in my original post, the way I included my services came in the form of this sentence, “we can also offer services that are fit for any season, not just Summer, do you need leaves removed from your yard or snow off your driveway? We can do that as well”, now if a reader were to skim through my whole original post, there’s a decent chance that they may not even see the part that talks about the other services that we offer and that’s exactly why I put the services in a list form completely separated from the rest of the text so that it’s a lot harder for the reader to miss that information on their first read.