When looking at my original version of my introduction post from the previous assignment, I realized that it had way too many run on sentences with far too many words that really didn’t feel like they were fully necessary for what I was trying to get across in the post, so I had to figure out what exactly I was trying to get across to my audience and what they would find useful in the post, I decided that ultimately what the audience would be looking for would be the services that my company offers and how they can access those services, that made me decide to include the services in a list form that would stick out to the reader who would most likely be scanning through the post instead of reading through the whole post word by word, I also decided to heavily reduce the size of the post by only including important information and using simple words that anyone could understand.
I also made a visual element that centers solely around the services and includes the way that the customer could contact my company so that they can access the services themselves.